@ Chapter 13
- Team Elron all the way!
- Does the fails on the police department side of things seem too coincidental to anyone else?
- Wow! She can be such a bitch!
@ Chapter 14
- I don’t know about anyone else, but this book makes me hungry!
- Seriously! Several food decisions have been a reflection of what they were eating.
- Be glad they are stupid, it makes it easier to catch them.
- That lady elf’s comment was very curious!?
@ Chapter 15
- Such a short chapter.
- Maybe the chapter situation should of been thought over more closely, or maybe its just me.
@ Chapter 16
- Can a troll please eat Carls already! Please!
- So are all dwarves Scotts?
- Daddy issues! That explains a lot! Still not an excuse for being so mean to Elron!
- Andrew seems too good to be true.
@ Chapter 17
- Finally! Answers!
- Damnit! Grr!
@ Chapter 18
- I wonder if all this info about sucubi and incubi will come into play sometime later?
- Caution is the proper response here.
- Issues much? Someone needs some help.
Written by N.E. Conneely
Read by Jeff Hays